http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/ haiku & other small poems Sun, 13 May 2012 10:35:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/comment-page-1/#comment-273 Dylan Tweney Wed, 16 Dec 2009 23:23:15 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=222#comment-273 I like the sly humor in this one. The "stars" could be the artificial lights -- or it could be that just as the stars in the sky appear, the artificial lights turn on and drown them out. I like the sly humor in this one. The “stars” could be the artificial lights — or it could be that just as the stars in the sky appear, the artificial lights turn on and drown them out.

]]> http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/comment-page-1/#comment-272 Kathabela Wilson Wed, 16 Dec 2009 23:06:59 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=222#comment-272 This one evokes a double chorus... the stars... come out... and the tiny lights go one... as if answering one another! This one evokes a double chorus… the stars… come out… and the tiny lights go one… as if answering one another!

]]> http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/comment-page-1/#comment-181 Dylan Tweney Wed, 16 Dec 2009 15:23:15 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=222#comment-181 I like the sly humor in this one. The lights coming on automatically could either be the "stars" -- or the artificial lights could be drowning out the stars in the sky, just as those come out. I like the sly humor in this one. The lights coming on automatically could either be the “stars” — or the artificial lights could be drowning out the stars in the sky, just as those come out.

]]> http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/comment-page-1/#comment-179 Kathabela Wilson Wed, 16 Dec 2009 15:06:59 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=222#comment-179 This one evokes a double chorus... the stars... come out... and the tiny lights go one... as if answering one another! This one evokes a double chorus… the stars… come out… and the tiny lights go one… as if answering one another!

]]> http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/comment-page-1/#comment-168 ellenolinger Sat, 12 Dec 2009 08:07:39 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=222#comment-168 grown sustainably<br>Christmas bouquet<br>of lilies and greens grown sustainably
Christmas bouquet
of lilies and greens

]]> http://tinywords.com/2009/12/11/222/comment-page-1/#comment-167 francesruthharris Fri, 11 Dec 2009 20:05:40 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=222#comment-167 Just such promise~!<br>Thank you Just such promise~!
Thank you

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