Comments on: http://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/ haiku & other small poems Fri, 10 Feb 2012 21:10:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Alan Summershttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-361 Alan Summers Sat, 16 Jan 2010 15:43:24 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-361 I like the haiku and the image works well too.Christmas has been the season of emergency services lights and alarums.Alan I like the haiku and the image works well too.

Christmas has been the season of emergency services lights and alarums.

Alan

]]> By: Kathabela Wilsonhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-252 Kathabela Wilson Wed, 23 Dec 2009 07:15:30 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-252 Brightly lit reminder of the fragile hold we have on existence, the season fraught with loss as well as gifts of life, a surprising and stunning image, and a bold one. Brightly lit reminder of the fragile hold we have on existence, the season fraught with loss as well as gifts of life, a surprising and stunning image, and a bold one.

]]> By: davidserjeanthttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-251 davidserjeant Wed, 23 Dec 2009 05:39:58 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-251 Thanks Dylan - I didn't want to annoy anyone at the British Haiku Society. I couldn't get my comments to work, either, so I may have posted twice.<br><br>Thanks for publishing - good to see it on your site. I have been enjoying the other work.<br><br>Cheers! Thanks Dylan – I didn't want to annoy anyone at the British Haiku Society. I couldn't get my comments to work, either, so I may have posted twice.

Thanks for publishing – good to see it on your site. I have been enjoying the other work.

Cheers!

]]> By: Dylan Tweneyhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-250 Dylan Tweney Wed, 23 Dec 2009 04:00:51 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-250 David, thanks for noting that -- I'd somehow forgotten to include the prior publication note when I published this. I've added it to the main part of the post now too. David, thanks for noting that — I'd somehow forgotten to include the prior publication note when I published this. I've added it to the main part of the post now too.

]]> By: Kathabela Wilsonhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-213 Kathabela Wilson Tue, 22 Dec 2009 23:15:30 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-213 Brightly lit reminder of the fragile hold we have on existence, the season fraught with loss as well as gifts of life, a surprising and stunning image, and a bold one. Brightly lit reminder of the fragile hold we have on existence, the season fraught with loss as well as gifts of life, a surprising and stunning image, and a bold one.

]]> By: davidserjeanthttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-212 davidserjeant Tue, 22 Dec 2009 21:39:58 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-212 Thanks Dylan - I didn't want to annoy anyone at the British Haiku Society. I couldn't get my comments to work, either, so I may have posted twice.<br><br>Thanks for publishing - good to see it on your site. I have been enjoying the other work.<br><br>Cheers! Thanks Dylan – I didn't want to annoy anyone at the British Haiku Society. I couldn't get my comments to work, either, so I may have posted twice.

Thanks for publishing – good to see it on your site. I have been enjoying the other work.

Cheers!

]]> By: Dylan Tweneyhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-211 Dylan Tweney Tue, 22 Dec 2009 20:00:51 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-211 David, thanks for noting that -- I'd somehow forgotten to include the prior publication note when I published this. I've added it to the main part of the post now too. David, thanks for noting that — I'd somehow forgotten to include the prior publication note when I published this. I've added it to the main part of the post now too.

]]> By: columbusmatthttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-209 columbusmatt Tue, 22 Dec 2009 12:35:10 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-209 Powerful moment. Powerful moment.

]]> By: davidserjeanthttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-208 davidserjeant Tue, 22 Dec 2009 12:27:52 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-208 first published in Blithe Spirit first published in Blithe Spirit

]]> By: benjamin11http://tinywords.com/2009/12/22/242/comment-page-1/#comment-207 benjamin11 Tue, 22 Dec 2009 12:25:46 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=242#comment-207 Christmas Poem<br><br>there is a man<br>on a street corner<br>with a sign<br>that reads<br>"Jesus is the Reason<br>for the Season"<br><br>my wife suggests<br>we take up<br>the opposite corner<br>holding a diagram<br>of a tilted earth<br><br>Hello, I enjoyed your tiny words. Do you link your site to others? If so, I would like to trade links. My site is here: <a href="http://www.short-zen-poems.com" rel="nofollow">Short Zen Poems - Mindfulness, Meditation</a>. Namaste. Benjamin Christmas Poem

there is a man
on a street corner
with a sign
that reads
“Jesus is the Reason
for the Season”

my wife suggests
we take up
the opposite corner
holding a diagram
of a tilted earth

Hello, I enjoyed your tiny words. Do you link your site to others? If so, I would like to trade links. My site is here: Short Zen Poems – Mindfulness, Meditation. Namaste. Benjamin

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