Comments on: http://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/ haiku & other small poems Sun, 13 May 2012 10:35:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Garry Eatonhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-342 Garry Eaton Wed, 13 Jan 2010 23:32:39 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-342 It's hard for me to visualize a 'teal-trailed wake of light.' What is that? It’s hard for me to visualize a ‘teal-trailed wake of light.’ What is that?

]]> By: Alan Summershttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-277 Alan Summers Wed, 30 Dec 2009 05:25:03 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-277 Nice rhythm, with an 'almost' dissonance section. Good to see fine examples of one line haiku. Nice rhythm, with an 'almost' dissonance section. Good to see fine examples of one line haiku.

]]> By: yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWUhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-237 yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWU Thu, 24 Dec 2009 08:30:54 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-237 hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene

]]> By: ly_lahttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-236 ly_la Thu, 24 Dec 2009 03:39:40 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-236 all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:<br><br>őszi lombon át<br>smaragdzöldcsóvás fények<br>sugárörvénye all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:

őszi lombon át
smaragdzöldcsóvás fények
sugárörvénye

]]> By: CraigRStevenshttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-235 CraigRStevens Thu, 24 Dec 2009 02:36:24 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-235 Winter Winds Blow <br>leaves left behind by Fall<br>into oblivion Winter Winds Blow
leaves left behind by Fall
into oblivion

]]> By: susanrogershttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-234 susanrogers Thu, 24 Dec 2009 01:22:03 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-234 I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him. I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.

]]> By: yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWUhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-218 yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWU Thu, 24 Dec 2009 00:30:54 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-218 hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene

]]> By: ly_lahttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-217 ly_la Wed, 23 Dec 2009 19:39:40 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-217 all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:<br><br>őszi lombon át<br>smaragdzöldcsóvás fények<br>sugárörvénye all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:

őszi lombon át
smaragdzöldcsóvás fények
sugárörvénye

]]> By: CraigRStevenshttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-216 CraigRStevens Wed, 23 Dec 2009 18:36:24 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-216 Winter Winds Blow <br>leaves left behind by Fall<br>into oblivion Winter Winds Blow
leaves left behind by Fall
into oblivion

]]> By: susanrogershttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/23/246/comment-page-1/#comment-215 susanrogers Wed, 23 Dec 2009 17:22:03 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=246#comment-215 I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him. I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.

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