in the air
rain in the rain
air


4 Responses

  1. yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWU Says:

    hi david have you tried your haiku in one-line? marlene

  2. Dylan Tweney Says:

    in the air
    me in me
    air

    (totally derivative, but it just occurred to me)

    also:

    in the world
    me in me
    the world

  3. gosiazamorska Says:

    Good one.

  4. Sandra Simpson Says:

    It’s a great haiku, David, very insightful.

    Do you know this one by Jim Kacian:

    clouds seen
    through clouds
    seen through

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