Comments on: http://tinywords.com/2009/12/31/253/ haiku & other small poems Sun, 13 May 2012 10:35:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Sandra Simpsonhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/31/253/comment-page-1/#comment-312 Sandra Simpson Fri, 08 Jan 2010 22:55:13 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=253#comment-312 It's a great haiku, David, very insightful.Do you know this one by Jim Kacian:clouds seen through clouds seen through It’s a great haiku, David, very insightful.

Do you know this one by Jim Kacian:

clouds seen
through clouds
seen through

]]> By: gosiazamorskahttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/31/253/comment-page-1/#comment-289 gosiazamorska Sun, 03 Jan 2010 18:34:39 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=253#comment-289 Good one. Good one.

]]> By: Dylan Tweneyhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/31/253/comment-page-1/#comment-285 Dylan Tweney Sat, 02 Jan 2010 02:43:59 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=253#comment-285 in the air <br>me in me<br>air<br><br>(totally derivative, but it just occurred to me)<br><br>also:<br><br>in the world<br>me in me<br>the world in the air
me in me
air

(totally derivative, but it just occurred to me)

also:

in the world
me in me
the world

]]> By: yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWUhttp://tinywords.com/2009/12/31/253/comment-page-1/#comment-282 yahoo-VQ2WFDBT3XSSYIMZMJV4DF4PWU Fri, 01 Jan 2010 00:14:52 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=253#comment-282 hi david have you tried your haiku in one-line? marlene hi david have you tried your haiku in one-line? marlene

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