no more bread–
I’m a shovel in the hand
of winter


3 Responses

  1. Melissa Spurr Says:

    This evokes a deep sense of desolation. A great poem, Dana-Maria.

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Great. Full of imagination-provoking uncertainty.

  3. Rhoda Galgiani Says:

    Giving one the sense of isolation – portraying a lifeless situation. Interesting, giving one something to ponder.

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