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By: Audra Mcmann

Audra Mcmann — Sun, 30 Jan 2011 06:53:37 +0000

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By: Ian McLoughlin

Ian McLoughlin — Mon, 11 Jan 2010 09:32:00 +0000

Loved this; read it after returning from a weekend Dream Therapy course !

By: Donna Fleischer

Donna Fleischer — Sun, 10 Jan 2010 15:49:36 +0000

Thank you for letting your dream go,
become poem, join
the world outside, in a dream

Like this poem so much
don’t want to let it go
as it floats by

nothing to do
but let go,
awaken

By: Kathabela Wilson

Kathabela Wilson — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 06:03:20 +0000

I do love the early morning feeling between sleep and wake… dream mixes with waking sights and feelings and it is almost as if the dream embodied floats out the window… this haiku says it best! I should keep quiet and watch!

By: Mary

Mary — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 04:50:39 +0000

Very evocative. Well done.

By: cheryl

cheryl — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 02:41:59 +0000

Mmmmm, I like this. Not wanting to wake from a wonderful dream, darn the light.

By: genie

genie — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 22:58:55 +0000

I’m saving this one in my haiku folder.

By: charlie rossiter

charlie rossiter — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 19:04:22 +0000

There’s a nice ethereal quality to this one and a consistency of light and openness.

By: Benjamin @ Short Zen Poems

Benjamin @ Short Zen Poems — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 16:37:43 +0000

I like this one. It draws attention to the shift between sleep and wake. Ramana Maharshi in particular speaks about the value of comparing the sleeping state to the waking state. The purity that becomes infiltrated by all the mind stuff that pours in when our dreams leave us and the day to day creeps in.

I also write very short poetry. Please feel free to check it out at Short Zen Poems – Koans Quotes Parables