silent snow
the coldness
between us


7 Responses

  1. Tanya Dikova Says:

    deep silence

    between us

    first snowflakes

  2. Janice Campbell Says:

    Well done.

  3. Brian Says:

    distant radio
    our song
    not our song anymore

  4. Andrea Says:

    Poignant…

  5. Rhoda Galgiani Says:

    you are going east
    i shall go west tomorrow
    let’s meet here today

  6. ly_la Says:

    a possible hubgarian version

    hómezők csendje
    borult ránk és közénk és
    itt most hideg van

  7. Alison Says:

    OOH is all I have to say.

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