I’ll put it back in the earth, as soft as dust :: a word too much


9 Responses

  1. Carole Dwinell Says:

    Intense. But lovely, soft and so willing to have many interpretations. Beautiful!

  2. Audrey Manring Says:

    Not a “word too much” here. Soft words, solid as earth. Thank you.

  3. Merrill Ann Gonzales Says:

    a word to remember…thanks, merrill

    first resolution broken already

  4. Kathabela Wilson Says:

    I feel this as an exquisite and unusual poem, I find it very moving…

  5. Stacy Post Says:

    Haunting and tender. Deeply felt. Thank you!

  6. Rhoda Galgiani Says:

    Impressive words bringing the reader wanting to read this haiku again. Nice work!

  7. marjorie buettner Says:

    Thank you for sharing your unique vision.You truly have the gift of insight.
    Thank you for your words

    Marjorie Buettner

  8. Carole Katsantoness Says:

    Very moving, thank you!

  9. wrіte my paper Says:

    Kids should be teaching from the beginning right path so they can distinguish between right and wrong and they should be clear of purpose of education. New generation must be train to face the challenges of life and ethics in the children.

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