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Your poem was fun, for me! First read, I thought it sad and moving. Second read, I imagined that the person COULD be relieved that he was finally left to his own thoughts and imagination.
January 28th, 2010 at 1:56 pm
Alone under the stars and living
in the precious memory.
January 28th, 2010 at 3:47 pm
Simply moving. Amazing how a short poem like this can have so much emotion.
January 28th, 2010 at 3:55 pm
Wonderful! Beautiful!
January 28th, 2010 at 3:58 pm
Beautiful, sad, moving. Thank you.
January 28th, 2010 at 7:08 pm
Oh, Roberta, My John always knew the name of everything! And you’ve named the spot where I now live.
January 29th, 2010 at 7:36 am
Fantastic one liner. So much in it, what’s there and what’s not.
February 4th, 2010 at 12:12 pm
Your poem was fun, for me! First read, I thought it sad and moving. Second read, I imagined that the person COULD be relieved that he was finally left to his own thoughts and imagination.
February 4th, 2010 at 3:14 pm
I like the spare quality in the speaker’s longing very much… one from my pocket:
handful of agates
nootka roses on the wind
this far without you
June 11th, 2010 at 9:38 am
magnificent line!…
i could feel how sad this is…