winter dusk
when dad
would phone


7 Responses

  1. Helen Buckingham Says:

    Father’s Day…an 11th hour teddy bear

    (Prune Juice, Autumn 09)

  2. Gosia Zamorska Says:

    Roberta, it’s a pleasure to experience Your haiku.

    It’s deep and natural. Rare.

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Beautiful, and all in just six words.

    Alan
    With Words

  4. Rhoda Galgiani Says:

    Special time, special moment…

  5. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Memories are always warm.
    Missing is a reality.

  6. syllable┬║17 Says:

    Poignant haiku, a good first sentence also.

  7. aminanimator Says:

    wareright roberta

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