burnt toast
no matter what I do
the rain seeps in


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10 Responses

  1. Rhoda Galgiani Says:

    Negative input turning to positive reading. Well done!

  2. Merrill Ann Gonzales Says:

    I know this mood well…thanks for the words to hold it.

  3. Andrea Says:

    Echoes of Kerouac here! Well done.

  4. syllableº17 Says:

    in my attic
    avoiding the ocean
    a wild puddle!

  5. Princess Haiku Says:

    Very cool.

  6. Sue Knapp Says:

    Most of us can relate.

  7. syllableº17 Says:

    I NEVER burn toast, Sue – speak for yourself!

    at the car boot sale
    one slice toaster seller says:
    “not a novelty!”

  8. Alison Hedlund Says:

    Do you live in the Pacific Northwest? :-) I see a rainy winter morning (winter=rainy season) and depression, along with not starting the day out on the right foot. Well-captured.

  9. Cindy Tebo Says:

    No, Alison, I don’t live in the Pacific Northwest but I can relate.

    Thanks everyone for your comments!

  10. martin Says:

    Cindy Tebo, your haiku and more importantly you, are wonderful, period.

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