burnt toast
no matter what I do
the rain seeps in

—Cindy Tebo

Issue 9.1 | 8 February 2010
Responses (9)


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9 Responses

  1. Rhoda Galgiani Says:
    February 8th, 2010 at 2:16 pm

    Negative input turning to positive reading. Well done!

  2. Merrill Ann Gonzales Says:
    February 8th, 2010 at 2:24 pm

    I know this mood well…thanks for the words to hold it.

  3. Andrea Says:
    February 8th, 2010 at 2:48 pm

    Echoes of Kerouac here! Well done.

  4. syllableº17 Says:
    February 8th, 2010 at 5:08 pm

    in my attic
    avoiding the ocean
    a wild puddle!

  5. Princess Haiku Says:
    February 8th, 2010 at 10:07 pm

    Very cool.

  6. Sue Knapp Says:
    February 13th, 2010 at 12:19 pm

    Most of us can relate.

  7. syllableº17 Says:
    February 22nd, 2010 at 12:04 am

    I NEVER burn toast, Sue – speak for yourself!

    at the car boot sale
    one slice toaster seller says:
    “not a novelty!”

  8. Alison Hedlund Says:
    February 26th, 2010 at 3:15 pm

    Do you live in the Pacific Northwest? :-) I see a rainy winter morning (winter=rainy season) and depression, along with not starting the day out on the right foot. Well-captured.

  9. Cindy Tebo Says:
    March 4th, 2010 at 7:59 am

    No, Alison, I don’t live in the Pacific Northwest but I can relate.

    Thanks everyone for your comments!

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