Comments on: http://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/ haiku & other small poems Fri, 10 Feb 2012 21:10:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: martin1223http://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-5512 martin1223 Wed, 13 Oct 2010 01:50:06 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-5512 silence snowflakes melt on the window silence
snowflakes melt on the window

]]> By: Alison Hedlundhttp://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-754 Alison Hedlund Fri, 26 Feb 2010 22:10:49 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-754 What Carole said! This one keeps opening up and out. Lovely. What Carole said! This one keeps opening up and out. Lovely.

]]> By: syllableº17http://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-673 syllableº17 Sat, 20 Feb 2010 01:32:20 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-673 Gabi Greve takes the prize. Well done - an excellent use of kigo!next morning the snow was over everything^_^ Gabi Greve takes the prize. Well done – an excellent use of kigo!

next morning
the snow was over
everything

^_^

]]> By: Gabi Grevehttp://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-560 Gabi Greve Tue, 09 Feb 2010 23:48:31 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-560 .heavy snowfall - a white silence deepensFrom 2005 http://happyhaiku.blogspot.com/2005/12/heavy-snowfall.html. .

heavy snowfall –
a white silence
deepens

From 2005
http://happyhaiku.blogspot.com/2005/12/heavy-snowfall.html

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]]> By: Gosia Zamorskahttp://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-555 Gosia Zamorska Tue, 09 Feb 2010 20:25:54 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-555 I like it. I like it.

]]> By: Rhoda Galgianihttp://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-553 Rhoda Galgiani Tue, 09 Feb 2010 17:43:21 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-553 Represents to me of being alone during a cold period of ones life. Well written! Represents to me of being alone during a cold period of ones life. Well written!

]]> By: Carole Dwinellhttp://tinywords.com/2010/02/09/386/comment-page-1/#comment-551 Carole Dwinell Tue, 09 Feb 2010 16:31:27 +0000 http://tinywords.com/?p=386#comment-551 I like how this beautiful poem has layers. It could be an observation of the weather with a feeling of being either in a forest or perhaps even in town with the sounds of traffic, etc being muffled by the snow and yet... it speaks of emotions, of coldness, of distance and darkening. Well done. I like how this beautiful poem has layers. It could be an observation of the weather with a feeling of being either in a forest or perhaps even in town with the sounds of traffic, etc being muffled by the snow and yet… it speaks of emotions, of coldness, of distance and darkening.
Well done.

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