remission —
in the rear-view the crow
settles back on the roadkill


4 Responses

  1. gergely lászló Says:

    a rend visszaáll –
    a tükörből látni a varjút
    amint a dögre visszaszáll

  2. gergely lászló Says:

    http://www.terebess.hu/haiku/serjeant.html

  3. Kaye Laird Says:

    I like your choice of the word "remission"—well said David Serjeant.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Good haiku. "remission" is certainly a keyword. Moving and strong.

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