the lie
i almost tell
bruised ginger


7 Responses

  1. john emil vincent Says:

    wow! amazing poem.

  2. @Jon_Summers Says:

    This is very good!

  3. d. f. tweney Says:

    I agree. this is a mysterious one — I don't fully understand what's going on in it — but that's the appeal. Love it.

  4. gergely lászló Says:

    majdnem hazudtam
    de mégsem – összetörne
    szegény kis szöszim

  5. gergely lászló Says:

    http://www.terebess.hu/haiku/slater.html

  6. @Roman_Ly Says:

    Very nice :))

  7. coreurus@mm.com Says:

    brend
    laughts
    vivid

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