Clouds building outside
Heralding a thunderstorm
My cube grows smaller


3 Responses

  1. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    I liked it. I report that at first I did not think of a cube in the sense of an office cubicle. I liked it better before I thought of that. The cube seemed metaphysically small land spacious, the place of the self, but with right angle, Hamlet’s nutshell.

  2. gergely lászló Says:

    gyűlnek a felhők
    jelzik: égiháburú lesz
    zsugorodik a cellám

  3. Michael Lee Johnson Says:

    The work cube had to be thought about which is the nature of poetry. But was it a condo, house, room, cubicle getting smaller. Not a criticism, but a rendering of thought pattern.

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