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By: Woodrat Podcast 21: Dylan Tweney

Woodrat Podcast 21: Dylan Tweney — Thu, 23 Sep 2010 01:29:17 +0000

[...] the junkyard crane… [haiku] [...]

By: Tanya McDonald

Tanya McDonald — Sun, 01 Aug 2010 06:36:09 +0000

Thanks, everyone, for your comments! I just wrote down what I saw from the train window, so I'm glad it worked on some level.

By: Alison

Alison — Fri, 30 Jul 2010 00:48:06 +0000

Nice work and contrasts, Tanya. I did have occasion to visit a junkyard this year, retiring our family car, an old Ford Taurus wagon. It was hard to let it go…..but it was time.

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:33:28 +0000

Reading too quickly on Twitter, I first read this as "wind-tossed puppies." Rather changes the meaning.

By: Merrill Gonzales

Merrill Gonzales — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:21:58 +0000

It's a good haiku… it says more than the words… Thanks.

By: Alan Summers

Alan Summers — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 17:07:29 +0000

Very evocative.