a beach day like any other until she unwinds the ties of her bikini
—Scott Duke Kominers
Issue 10.2 | 6 August 2010
a day like any other until my first Playboy arrived in the mail
And don't we all like memorable days~! Thanks for posting this one~!
Great micro poem. Feeling. Imagery is
vivid. We’ve all had a moment or 2
when God says, “look what I can do!”.
Take an ordinary day and make you
smile inside.
Have read a lovely little haiku after a long time. R K Singh
That was exactly the kind of local color I was looking for. Mark Twain.
increible
nudist beach the young woman’s wide hat shades her shadow
Orchid beach the small of her back glistens into a curve
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August 6th, 2010 at 2:11 pm
a day like any other
until my first Playboy
arrived in the mail
August 6th, 2010 at 2:37 pm
And don't we all like memorable days~!
Thanks for posting this one~!
August 6th, 2010 at 6:10 pm
Great micro poem. Feeling. Imagery is
vivid. We’ve all had a moment or 2
when God says, “look what I can do!”.
Take an ordinary day and make you
smile inside.
August 6th, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Have read a lovely little haiku after a long time.
R K Singh
August 9th, 2010 at 6:21 am
That was exactly the kind of local color I was looking for.
Mark Twain.
October 7th, 2010 at 6:02 pm
increible
October 10th, 2010 at 3:18 pm
nudist beach
the young woman’s wide hat
shades her shadow
October 10th, 2010 at 3:28 pm
Orchid beach
the small of her back glistens
into a curve