rain in the puddle—
I have nothing to give
to the street musicians


5 Responses

  1. Mike Farley Says:

    Very nice. I never have much to give them either, but I usually appreciate them. Nice juxtiposition with the puddle of rain. Congratulations. Nice work.

  2. Norman Darlington Says:

    Very nice reciprocal metaphor. Molto giapponesco!

  3. Valeria Says:

    Thanks, Mike!
    Thanks, Jason!

    Norman, in wich 語 should I rispondere?

  4. martin1223 Says:

    I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for showing it.

    the red horizon in puddles
    darkened street

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Good one! ;-)

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