towpath—
a blue heron shifts
the twilight


 

 

(for Lenard D. Moore)

 

 

 

 

Previous publications: miniwords 2008 haiku contest 3rd place; Haiku Poets Central Maryland 2008 poemsheet ‘lunch break’


9 Responses

  1. Merrill Gonzales Says:

    Lenard, Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause between species… Thanks, Merrill

  2. Merrill Gonzales Says:

    Roberta! That was your haiku! I thought it was Lenard's … but the comment bears up… "Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause where two minds meet!" Wonderful…

  3. Mary Says:

    Nicely done…

  4. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Lovely. So much image in such quite words.

  5. Norman Darlington Says:

    Simply wonderful!

  6. Alan Summers Says:

    Nice one Roberta! ;-)

  7. Mark Rutter Says:

    both subtle and striking…

  8. petertwo.oh Says:

    striking imagery. like it!

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    You know somethings a good haiku when it's both fresh and new each reading. ;-)

    Alan
    The With Words Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html
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