last bloom—
closing
the shears


7 Responses

  1. Patricia Carragon Says:

    lovely. the end of the blooming season.

  2. ayaz daryl nielsen Says:

    lovely, touching – a bit sad – nicely done

  3. gillena cox Says:

    five words so very well chosen to resonate endings

    much love
    gillena

  4. petertwo.oh Says:

    The image of 'the shears' here as a closing element is wonderful. Great!

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful and poignant.

  6. Don Baird Says:

    autumn eve'
    droplets pitter patter
    on the roof

  7. martin1223 Says:

    autumn morning
    the bowl’s cornflakes cover
    the milk puddle

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