moonrise
moonset
your nakedness


17 Responses

  1. Allison Millcock Says:

    Traditionally, haiku only encompasses one moment. Introducing a second moment weekens this piece for me.

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    There is something about seeing both the moonrise and the moonset, and feeling naked in the glory of the nightsky.

    Alan, With Words

  3. Merrill Gonzales Says:

    the light in your eyes
    still smiling……. :-)

  4. martin1223 Says:

    from her dark hip the moon's curve

  5. d. f. tweney Says:

    moonrise the deck slick with silver light

  6. Ed Schwellenbach Says:

    day moon
    sleeping in
    this morning

  7. gyozajoe Says:

    the moon fills
    her depression returns
    the dark forces amass

  8. gillena cox Says:

    awesome

    much love
    gillena

  9. Jeffrey Winke Says:

    yes, yes… I am fond of naked haiku

  10. Marjorie Buettner Says:

    This haiku is perfect in so many ways…

  11. Alan Summers Says:

    Not an urban image, but these trees are eerily spectacular at dusk anywhere.

    old dam . . .
    a single ghost gum
    glows at moonrise

    Azami haiku magazine Special Spring/Summer Edition (Japan, 1997) ,
    ed. Alan Summers

  12. Christopher Pickslay Says:

    nightfall–
    the penumbra disappears
    from her hip

  13. Kelenna Says:

    That’s an astute answer to a tricky quitoesn

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