leaving the Tokyo subway,
a hundred umbrellas
rise in unison


5 Responses

  1. @erinbowbooks Says:

    Entering the Toyko subway
    A thousand umbrellas
    bow

  2. Jordan Says:

    Excellent poem, beautiful image. A reflection on interdependent cultures too.

  3. Jade Says:

    Vivid sense of togetherness – especially love the musical sense in the word choice, "unison"

  4. Brad P. Olson Says:

    Excellent! This poem creates a strong image that's not easily forgotten.

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Great images come to me with this, neat!

    Alan

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