lovers’ moon—
a cicada leaves its shell
on the fence post


11 Responses

  1. Darrell Byrd Says:

    Now' that is great contemporary haiku!!!

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    I also get a daily e-mail of a translation of Isa. The first time I read this I thought it was Isa.

  3. Barry G Says:

    Nice work.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    This is a really neat haiku.

  5. James Says:

    Wonderful.

  6. gillena cox Says:

    morning star
    showing the way
    from dawn to day

    much love
    gillena

  7. Kathe L. Palka Says:

    Thank you for your kind words and responses. This one came right from my backyard.

  8. John Emil Vincent Says:

    Excellent!

  9. judith ingram Says:

    I am transported to that moon scene.
    Lost in the mystery of it.

  10. judith ingram Says:

    I am transported by the moon scene.
    And captured by the mystery of it.

  11. Gilberto Says:

    Both pertinent qunteioss, Lauren.When a friend gives us a gift which we toss aside what would we say when he asks Did you like my gift? To add a religious (not neccessarily of any particular faith) slant:He has given us this Gift and when we finally meet Him, what would we say when He asks I waited long for you. How did you get lost, did my Gift not work? Thank you for your visit and lovely comment.Luv and hugz,Eric

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