cherry
blossoms
drifting
down
mission
street
three
pink
hookers
December 29th, 2010 at 5:36 am
Ed beautiful and simply stated
December 29th, 2010 at 7:23 am
It is not often I come across a "cherry blossom" poem that is so unique and delightful. Good job, Ed!
December 29th, 2010 at 5:01 pm
Ed, great job, esp with the step look here. The color of cherry blossoms so over used, combined with the implied "church mssion" 3 pink hookers-leave a last image that really caught my attention. Michael Lee Johnson, Poet, Itasca IL.
December 30th, 2010 at 5:14 pm
sultry evening
liquid from the take out bag
runs near the victim
World Haiku Review Vol 2: Issue 3 November 2002
WHCvanguard – Hard or "Real" Haiku
Selected by Susumu Takiguchi
January 12th, 2011 at 2:54 pm
Love it. Reminds me of the week I stayed in the Mission twelve years ago — good times.
May 26th, 2016 at 7:54 pm
Ppl like you get all the brisna. I just get to say thanks for he answer.