cherry
          blossoms
                        drifting
                                   down
                                            mission
                                                       street
                                                                 three
                                                                          pink
                                                                                   hookers
 


6 Responses

  1. Elliot Says:

    Ed beautiful and simply stated

  2. Jennifer Says:

    It is not often I come across a "cherry blossom" poem that is so unique and delightful. Good job, Ed!

  3. Michael Lee Johnson Says:

    Ed, great job, esp with the step look here. The color of cherry blossoms so over used, combined with the implied "church mssion" 3 pink hookers-leave a last image that really caught my attention. Michael Lee Johnson, Poet, Itasca IL.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    sultry evening
    liquid from the take out bag
    runs near the victim

    World Haiku Review Vol 2: Issue 3 November 2002
    WHCvanguard – Hard or "Real" Haiku
    Selected by Susumu Takiguchi

  5. Peg Duthie Says:

    Love it. Reminds me of the week I stayed in the Mission twelve years ago — good times.

  6. Steffi Says:

    Ppl like you get all the brisna. I just get to say thanks for he answer.

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