no moon
looking outdoors
into snowlight

 

 

 

 

Previously published in Connecting Our Houses: A Calendar of Haiku/Senryu by Pat Laster and Dorothy McLaughlin, LovePat Press, Arkadelphia, AR 1997.


7 Responses

  1. @andreochka Says:

    Like extremely. This haiku conveys a special feeling of solitude: simple and to the point…

  2. haikutec Says:

    getting drunk
    with the ripe moon
    cadmium blues

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)

  3. Kathe L. Palka Says:

    Lovely Dorothy. Spare and beautiful.

  4. Mary Says:

    ….magical….thank you.

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    snowed in
    I watch the streetlamps
    and dream of Narnia

    Alan Summers
    Blithe Spirit vol. 20 no. 4 (2010)

  6. expatinCAT Says:

    The juxtaposition of 'no moon' and 'snowlight' is excellent. // Peter.

  7. shaheen Says:

    full moon starry night
    no boy in the streets
    fear stray bullets

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