the rabbit’s ears
translucent
at dawn


5 Responses

  1. peckinpah Says:

    Finally a decent haiku in this list.

  2. haikutec Says:

    Blimey that's harsh.

    John's is a good haiku so nice of him to hear you say that, but there's been some very good haiku in this batch too.

    Alan

  3. Helen Buckingham Says:

    I echo Alan's sentiments.

  4. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    A fine example of how a poem can evoke colors without mentioning the colors themselves. tinywords continues to excel in its choice and presentation of poetic short forms.

  5. Seren Fargo Says:

    I’ve known this experience. Thanks for stirring that memory.

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