white water rafting
         we spin around
our laughter

 

 

 

 

 

Previously published in Mayfly, Summer 2008


11 Responses

  1. martin1223 Says:

    That's really nice!

  2. Helen Buckingham Says:

    wonderfully joyful – captures the moment so vividly – great work, as ever, Kala

  3. Janice Campbell Says:

    I've been white water rafting once, and this captures the experience perfectly.

  4. @andreochka Says:

    Beautiful work, Kala! Full of joy!

  5. Barbara A Taylor Says:

    g'day kala

    love the energy in this!

    peace and love
    B

  6. kala ramesh Says:

    Thanks a ton to all who've taken the time to send your responses.
    This took place in Bali in 2007!
    I'm truly happy you were able to relate to this poem.

    a happy me . . .
    _kala :)

  7. Alan Summers Says:

    Nice one!

    Alan

  8. geoffpope Says:

    Fun! — especially effective with the indention.

  9. Michael Skelton Says:

    Heh… My rafting experience…

    White water rafting
    we compete
    to swallow the most river : )

  10. shaheen Says:

    dry reed bundle
    making a raft
    melon theft

  11. goro s アクセサリー Says:

    see by chloe

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