sun-baked dust—
  the one thing moving
   is my neighbour’s tongue

9 Responses

  1. Helen Buckingham Says:

    I can really feel the heat and the irritation – great stuff Lorin!

  2. Allison Millcock Says:

    Love it! Your wit is still as sharp as ever Lorin :)

  3. Melinda Hipple Says:

    Yes, this is excellent, Lorin. Not enough energy from the draining heat to even say, “Quiet!”

  4. Terri French Says:

    B-D Lorin–made me smile.

  5. Bouwe Brouwer Says:

    summer heat –
    my neighbour drills a hole
    in my patience

  6. Michael Skelton Says:

    sun baked dust
    the one thing moving
    is my neighbour's tongue

    and the mercury, red
    and my irritation, both
    rising to meet the sun

  7. shaheen Says:

    lovey lines can you see a broken ladder in neighbours orchard when there fruits are ripe enough

  8. Rodri Says:

    Heckuva good job. I sure apcpreiate it.

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