a crossword puzzle
side by side my parents


13 Responses

  1. Alison H. Says:

    We can envision the loving companionship and repartee that develops when two people share a favorite pastime; the child (however young or old) and onlooker become a part of the moment as well. The intimacy is sweetly and simply expressed.

  2. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    years after
    their passings
    here and there
    another piece
    falls into place

  3. Eric Berg Says:

    sudoku puzzle
    three times fist to my stomach
    this baby can't count

  4. Patricia Kelly Says:

    Thank you. Lovely. I live in a retirement community and there's one couple that's been married for longer than I've been alive. I get this feeling when in their presence.

  5. snowbirdpress Says:

    one down
    Jean

    I couldn't help thinking of this when I read your lovely verse.

  6. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    Thank you all for these beautiful comments.

  7. Mark Andrews Says:

    Very nice. A nice image, with depth of meaning. Works on many levels.

  8. Bouwe Brouwer Says:

    Beautiful!!

  9. geoffpope Says:

    Heartwarming . . . with great assonance and consonance.

  10. Seren Fargo Says:

    Such simplicity of words, yet it takes the reader so much deeper. What a nice feeling is evoked by this image. I find myself wondering – or imagining – what their years together have been.

  11. shaheen Says:

    lovely these feelings of yours need no words

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