alone tonight
the stillness
between stars


12 Responses

  1. Kat Creighton Says:

    cicada song
    not so alone
    between stars

  2. tygrbill Says:

    Like separate
    Membranes;
    Touching but not
    Connected.

  3. @andreochka Says:

    Simple but very nice…

  4. Bill Says:

    I think this is the best poem I've seen on tinywords. Beautiful.

  5. Jay Friedenberg Says:

    Many thanks Bill!

  6. Aurora Says:

    This is excellent, Jay.

  7. martin1223 Says:

    moonlit window
    a snow flake melts on another

  8. shaheen Says:

    lovely jay
    fishing in a still boat
    sea birds all around
    not a bad lonliness

  9. Jay Friedenberg Says:

    Very nice shasheen, captures some of the same spirt.

  10. GennadyNov41 Says:

    day is short
    evening sunset fire
    lanterns were lit

  11. GennadyNov41 Says:

    behind turn
    now, at last, the Moon
    and all stars

  12. Clara Says:

    It’s always a relief when someone with obvious exstreipe answers. Thanks!

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