alone tonight the stillness between stars
—Jay Friedenberg
Issue 11.2 | 25 August 2011
cicada song not so alone between stars
Like separate Membranes; Touching but not Connected.
Simple but very nice…
I think this is the best poem I've seen on tinywords. Beautiful.
This is excellent, Jay.
moonlit window a snow flake melts on another
lovely jay fishing in a still boat sea birds all around not a bad lonliness
day is short evening sunset fire lanterns were lit
behind turn now, at last, the Moon and all stars
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August 25th, 2011 at 6:48 pm
cicada song
not so alone
between stars
August 26th, 2011 at 12:09 am
Like separate
Membranes;
Touching but not
Connected.
August 26th, 2011 at 2:52 am
Simple but very nice…
August 26th, 2011 at 7:24 am
I think this is the best poem I've seen on tinywords. Beautiful.
August 26th, 2011 at 10:09 am
This is excellent, Jay.
August 31st, 2011 at 5:13 pm
moonlit window
a snow flake melts on another
September 24th, 2011 at 11:25 am
lovely jay
fishing in a still boat
sea birds all around
not a bad lonliness
October 13th, 2011 at 6:23 am
day is short
evening sunset fire
lanterns were lit
October 13th, 2011 at 6:27 am
behind turn
now, at last, the Moon
and all stars