summer’s end— I let the thimbleberry rest on my tongue
—Seren Fargo
Issue 11.2 | 23 September 2011
Delightful!
This is beautiful, Seren. I'm glad tinywords has a hard copy edition now, since it will be neat to have this in my library – and to enjoy it all over again when my copy arrives.
I can taste the fullness of the summer and the thimbleberry. Wonderful lightness!
Thank you for the wonderful comments. Much appreciated.
winter threat i let the ice cream bite melt on my tongue
I add my praise, Seren. Simply lovely. Your verb choice is most apt _kala
Very sensual.
Alan
I missed your poem again but this is wonderful!
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September 23rd, 2011 at 4:06 pm
Delightful!
September 23rd, 2011 at 4:29 pm
This is beautiful, Seren. I'm glad tinywords has a hard copy edition now, since it will be neat to have this in my library – and to enjoy it all over again when my copy arrives.
September 25th, 2011 at 9:21 pm
I can taste the fullness of the summer and the thimbleberry. Wonderful lightness!
September 25th, 2011 at 10:22 pm
Thank you for the wonderful comments. Much appreciated.
September 27th, 2011 at 4:12 am
winter threat
i let the ice cream bite
melt on my tongue
September 27th, 2011 at 7:09 pm
I add my praise, Seren.
Simply lovely.
Your verb choice is most apt
_kala
September 28th, 2011 at 4:02 am
Very sensual.
Alan
September 28th, 2011 at 9:03 am
I missed your poem again but this is wonderful!