where creek willows weave the sunlight ducklings


6 Responses

  1. Matt Says:

    I really admire all the ways the words work–AND I love the beautfiul image–very nice.

  2. Lisa Brown Says:

    Magical! I like both the reality-based image and the "sunlight ducklings" that my mind's eye conjured up :-)

  3. Helen Buckingham Says:

    Lovely.

  4. Norman Darlington Says:

    What Lisa said. And what Matt and Helen said too! You've clearly demonstrated some of the potential of the one-line ku, Lorin. Very nice!

  5. Peter Newton Says:

    The weaving of bright little birds as they paddle away under the cover of creek willows . . . so much is included in this delicate, tentative image I can't help but be pulled into the action and am soothed by what seems a narrow escape from and into the world. As poetry is apt to do.
    –Peter

  6. bett Says:

    lorin, you have woven words so beautiful they flow through my mind giving me a feeling of such serenity.
    bett

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