migrating geese—
wind flaps the scarecrow’s
empty sleeves


7 Responses

  1. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Yes! Thank you.

  2. snowbirdpress Says:

    Lorin, Certainly this a haiku for our time… Merrill

  3. bett angel-stawarz Says:

    genius at work again. Love it.
    bett

  4. Hannah Mahoney Says:

    Lovely — haunting.

  5. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    quiet grey skies
    and evergreens
    a day of rest

  6. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    Lorin, I love the captured movement and the overall tone. Very, very nice!

  7. shaheen Says:

    sparrows peep
    torn sleeves of
    a scarecrow

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