looking back at the tracks
slush turning to spring mud
I love your haiku, Charlie… it's funny how the path looks so undefined in the beginning, and how, after all the drifts and shoveling, suddenly there's spring. You've left the whole journey for each of us to fill in as we go…
December 14th, 2011 at 8:35 am
This is wonderful!
December 14th, 2011 at 9:31 am
Nicely wrought!
December 14th, 2011 at 10:50 am
Very original, Charles. An image that lingers.
Dru Philippou
December 14th, 2011 at 2:15 pm
looking back at the tracks
slush turning to spring mud
I love your haiku, Charlie… it's funny how the path looks so undefined in the beginning, and how, after all the drifts and shoveling, suddenly there's spring. You've left the whole journey for each of us to fill in as we go…
December 21st, 2011 at 10:26 pm
I like the ambiguity…snowflakes fluttering just as we, at some time in our lives flutter in the breeze.