across the blue dome of the great basin mustang’s eye

 

 

 

 

Originally published in the XIII Calico Cat International Bilingual Haiku Contest, where it received an Honorable Mention.


5 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    A fantastic haiku from one of our best practitioners.

    Alan, With Words

  2. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    even at the end
    especially at the end
    her beautiful soul
    greater than her illness
    sapphire eyes

  3. martin1223 Says:

    Thank You Ellen for your loving tanka…

    Thank you Alan …

  4. Kankodori Says:

    Thank you for crediting the Calico Cat contest, Dylan! And I am happy to see this lovely haiku is also appreciated on your page.

    Origa http://origa.livejournal.com

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