across his face
the light that slowly moves
across his field

 


8 Responses

  1. @andreochka Says:

    I like your style… really enjoyed this ku.

  2. Lisa Brown Says:

    So peaceful.

  3. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    farmers creating bales of hay the road home

  4. george carvalho Says:

    wow

  5. harrisfr Says:

    The reflection that triggers the field sheds light anew. This is such a nice presentation.

  6. @MerrillGonzales Says:

    footsteps through winter rye greening

  7. Bouwe Brouwer Says:

    Thanks everyone for your kind comments!

  8. Alan Summers Says:

    Beautifully engaging.

    all my mistakes
    each click of the pen
    the robin moves

    Alan Summers

    Publications credits:
    *Earlier version Presence #24 (2004); *earlier version ; "D'un ciel a l'autre" Anthologie de haiku de l'Union Europeenne, (Edition de l'Association francaise de haiku 2006); Seven By Twenty twitter-length fiction and poetry (March 2011)

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