twilight trees birds go in and out of song
(previously published in Acorn #26 — Spring 2011)
Issue 12.1 | 12 October 2012
A lovely image — and very satisfying on more than one level as well.
Always a sucker for dusk/twilight poems.
autumn twilight . . . swan shapes separate for the lone boatman
Publications credits: Snapshots 10 (2001); City: Bristol Today in Poems and Pictures (Paralalia 2004); BHS members anthology ‘River’ (2005); tinywords.com (2007)
Enjoyed your lovely twilight poem! Thanks for sending us the link to this site. I'm enjoying Kala's fine haiku, also.
twilight a moth follows the stream
in a hole through birdsong drips bougainvillaea
Publications credit: (Slater, B & Summers, A (eds.) 2012, Four Virtual Haiku Poets, Yet To Be Named Free Press, Stoke-on-Trent, England)
Excellent haiku, Kala. I see it right up there with Basho's "sound of water" haikai. o/ Jane
Thanks a ton for all your lovely comments. Wow! Jane, thanks a lot. Martin, Alan and Scott — v. nice response haiku. Enjoyed :) _kala
Simply beautiful, Kala.
Thanks a ton, Marion :)
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