another sunset
another gnat
swims in the wine


19 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Enjoyed.

    We both need to take more care of our wine!

    spooned from rioja
    the winefly stumbles
    over damp assam teabags

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Blithe Spirit 10:1 (2000)

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  2. Ross Says:

    More insect-ku! I love the stuff!

  3. Lynne Says:

    Love the way I get such a strong sense of time passing in these few words.

  4. Emyjay Says:

    Drowning gnat
    Disturbs your crimson wine
    And the setting sun

  5. martin1223 Says:

    Mozart opera
    a wave through the legs of a millipede

  6. Ross Says:

    Three cheers for the six-legged!

  7. Lisa Brown Says:

    I had to smile, imagining a tipsy gnat, doing the backstroke in your glass, sighing with pleasure at the sunset you are both watching!

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Sweet – obviously a regular occurence! I also love insect-ku :]

    midge haze –
    a dragonfly skip jives
    with its reflection

    First published in Shamrock Journal: No 18

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