dawn garden
a spotted fawn nibbles
at my resolve

9 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    We are always rewarded if we get up early enough. :-)


  2. Janice Campbell Says:

    Excellent. Love it.

  3. Sheila Sondik Says:

    You've captured perfectly the ambivalence deer evoke in nature-loving gardeners. Bravo!

  4. Emyjay Says:

    I love the last line – so clever – it left me wondering, just as it should. Thank you,

  5. Helen Buckingham Says:

    How could it not! Gorgeous.

  6. Ross Says:

    dawn garden
    a homeless person nibbles
    at my resolve

  7. Ross Says:

    dawn garden
    a homeless vegan nibbles
    at my resolve

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Each line seems to have a story attached – wonderful, Susan!

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