all that remains
of this childhood dream
white-washed bones
and a feathered wing
still flapping in the breeze

 


9 Responses

  1. Helen Buckingham Says:

    startling – and very moving

  2. Hannah Mahoney Says:

    Mysterious and haunting work, Lauren!

  3. Lisa Brown Says:

    Poignant.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Very moving, and excellent.

    Alan

  5. Collin Barber Says:

    Excellent!

  6. Gig Says:

    Intense yet beautiful .

  7. gabriele brunsch Says:

    …wonderful verse – touching and holding an everlasting truth…

  8. justafewlittlewords Says:

    Haunting indeed. Really well done.

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Very striking!

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