he talks to me
Issue 12.1 | 7 November 2012
so much implied here… the aging and choices… it can be embraced by all in the multitude of ways and relationships… a heartfelt poem with a tender, and emphatic, yet questioning tone…
Those shadows made me think this isn't going to be a change for the good…
Sounds very ominous. If it was downshifting I'd be more optimistic.
Enjoyed the haiku.
For me, there is the beauty of a knowing acceptance in this poem — a letting go of all that keeps me from true understanding.
Good one…says so much in so few words.
of ignoring each other
Thank you all for your thoughtful comments. I especially like the variety of interpretations of this haiku.
I love meeting you here… the poem's fine openness brings so many interpretations… and it's a moment so many can feel deeply.
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