deep sea fishing
the boy’s bluster lost
in the whitecaps

7 Responses

  1. Barbara A Taylor Says:

    g'day Bruce,

    I like the salty movement of this.

    peace and love

  2. Ross Says:

    Nice job. Brought to my mind Rudyard Kipling's CAPTAINS COURAGEOUS. (I'm not suggesting there was any influence.)

  3. martin1223 Says:

    I enjoyed the poem…
    A great movie too with Spencer Tracy, Freddy Bartholomew, Lionel Barrymore, Melvin Douglas, Mickey Rooney, and John Carradine:

    approaching storm
    the boatman fingers the bowl

    In Memory of John Carradine

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Very neat two line haiku Martin, very much enjoyed.


  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I love this – the use of 'bluster' and 'whitecaps' is great.

  6. Alan Summers Says:

    I enjoy your work, Bruce.


  7. Ferrule Fittings Says:

    Great though indeed. Love the way you have presented this interesting concept.

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