small town
one red light
Valentine’s Day


12 Responses

  1. Sylvia Forges-Ryan Says:

    Love this! It could even make the lovelorn smile.

  2. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Thanks for the memories!

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Sweet! :)

    marion

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    What to say but vincent tripi has replaced Eric Clapton as God.

    Wonderful to see this most exquisite of haiku writers at tinywords.

  5. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Thank Heavens there is more than one God! :-)

  6. Peggy Tilsen Says:

    Super. I bet it touched a personal note in every heart that was open.

  7. eikenlaan Says:

    Valentine day
    the traffic lights
    stuck on red

    Maire

  8. David H. Rosen Says:

    Bravo!

    After all the darkness
    light
    and more light

  9. Jem Says:

    Good one – an entire story in three lines.

  10. iPhone App Developer Says:

    I missed my valentine day.. On that day nobody I have :)

  11. S.M. Abeles Says:

    Oh, excellent!

  12. Tim Says:

    Fine poem and great structure. New to this. Not sure of etiquette of theft or dialogue:

    big town
    many redlights
    memorial day

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