winter chill
wearing her grandson’s coat
at the graveside

 

 

 

(originally appeared in “Scent of Rain,” the 2011 Southern California Haiku Study Group Anthology)


7 Responses

  1. Preston Martin Says:

    Wow. Perfect. I can feel it and see it.

  2. Beth Says:

    Good one…

  3. Robert Says:

    Lovely – really touching.

  4. Jem Says:

    Beautiful – captures the sense of family through a simple item of clothing.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Poignant.

  6. jorden Says:

    that's type of touching act remembering some old days. nice word

  7. Leila Says:

    Thanks – Enjoyed this update, how can I make is so that I receive an email whenever you

    publish a new post?

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