cold moon . . .
my mother goes
to voicemail


6 Responses

  1. eikenlaan Says:

    cold moon
    an apology
    from my mother

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    When I receive the email alert, and open that email, I always put a hand over the author's name so I can just absorb the impact of the poetry. This haiku really connected, instantly.

    I was delighted to see it was from one of my favourite writers too, although the poem stands on its own two feet without any need to be supported.

    Terrific work, with a subtle edge.

    Alan, With Words

  3. Ozzie Nogg Says:

    cold moon —
    they text
    while making love

  4. Lorin Ford Says:

    I like the ambiguity of interpretation made possible by the jux with 'cold moon'. One of my readings is a humorous reading. :-)

  5. Laurence Stacey Says:

    Excellent reading, Lorin! I'm just now seeing that aspect of it :-D

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I love this one.

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