our memories of him
so very different
swirling snowflakes


8 Responses

  1. evan coram Says:

    very nice.

  2. @andreochka Says:

    The second line acts as a good pivot… nicely done!

  3. eikenlaan Says:

    the snowflakes swirling are wonderful to juggle many thoughts in the air., the many memories and so different too.

  4. Zonkorias Says:

    This is a very memorable haiku about Frosty the Snowman.

  5. Cara Holman Says:

    Thank you all for your comments!

  6. Robert Says:

    So much detail in so few words.

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Yes, I like also like the pivot here.

  8. hiphop trader Says:

    thanks your tips

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