barely
longer than a cardinal’s call . . .
winter haiku


17 Responses

  1. Matt Says:

    Very nice, Margaret!

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Lovely, Margaret!

    Made me :)

    marion

  3. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thank you so much, Marion.

  4. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Good work, haunting, smart.

  5. Marjorie Buettner Says:

    I love this!

  6. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thank you, Marjorie.

  7. Michael Lee Johnson Says:

    Margaret Dornaus – the reverse affect of this mini poem is very clever and lovely. I invite you to submit work to Michael Lee Johnson at promomanusa@gmail.com. I run 7 poetry sites which you can find on line.

  8. Alison Hedlund Says:

    We have our songs, too…very nice.

  9. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thanks to all for the kind remarks . . .

  10. gillena cox Says:

    surprise ending very nice

  11. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thank you, Gillena.

  12. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Beautiful, Margaret!

  13. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thank you, Dawn . . . You are too sweet, too!

  14. @DreamsOfTaos Says:

    Very nice, Margaret — SMA

  15. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thank you so much, Scott!

  16. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    So beautiful and new. Just lovely.

  17. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    Thank you, Ellen!

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