foot massage
the creek gurgles
between my toes

4 Responses

  1. Sheila Sondik Says:

    So sensual!

  2. Rick Hartwell Says:

    been there
    and done that

  3. haikuapprentice Says:

    I love the opening. Perhaps it is my mirror neurons but the phrase "foot massage" triggered a delightfully sensual anticipatory tingle up my spine. Very nice onomatopoeia creates a vivid sensory image to concretize the setting. You've conjured a natural spa.

    As is well known self massage is never as relieving as one given by someone else, so I think I will save this poem up for next time my feet are weary and sore, and enjoy the effect it has on me.

    Thanks Sean for the massage!


  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh how I'd love to stand in a creek and let the water give me a foot massage! Lovely, Sean.


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