foot massage
the creek gurgles
between my toes


4 Responses

  1. Sheila Sondik Says:

    So sensual!

  2. Rick Hartwell Says:

    great
    been there
    and done that
    serenity

  3. haikuapprentice Says:

    I love the opening. Perhaps it is my mirror neurons but the phrase "foot massage" triggered a delightfully sensual anticipatory tingle up my spine. Very nice onomatopoeia creates a vivid sensory image to concretize the setting. You've conjured a natural spa.

    As is well known self massage is never as relieving as one given by someone else, so I think I will save this poem up for next time my feet are weary and sore, and enjoy the effect it has on me.

    Thanks Sean for the massage!

    Strider

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh how I'd love to stand in a creek and let the water give me a foot massage! Lovely, Sean.

    marion

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