Vivid, poignant poem of loss. A scene of both stasis and change. The survivor or caretaker is not ready to move on, but nature inevitably does. Beautifully penned.
A simply wonderful poem. I am always equally touched by the life stories/careers/backgrounds of contributors, which are interesting works of art unto themselves.
A well-depicted sense of sadness, loss and even a touch of madness here (the teacup made me think of the Mad Hatter's tea party) I really like this gothic haiku.
August 14th, 2013 at 11:28 am
Vivid, poignant poem of loss. A scene of both stasis and change. The survivor or caretaker is not ready to move on, but nature inevitably does. Beautifully penned.
August 14th, 2013 at 11:39 am
A simply wonderful poem. I am always equally touched by the life stories/careers/backgrounds of contributors, which are interesting works of art unto themselves.
August 14th, 2013 at 12:47 pm
broken teacup
thorns are restored
to the roses
August 14th, 2013 at 5:31 pm
Haunting, very beautiful haiku. Feeling that cold rain and loss.
August 15th, 2013 at 1:08 am
Wow.
August 15th, 2013 at 2:20 am
A well-depicted sense of sadness, loss and even a touch of madness here (the teacup made me think of the Mad Hatter's tea party) I really like this gothic haiku.
marion
August 15th, 2013 at 2:38 am
Love this so much. Such romantic images and feelings.
August 15th, 2013 at 9:20 am
Excellent! Just the right amount of poignancy.
Alan