roses lost in weeds–
her teacup filling again
with cold rain


8 Responses

  1. Alison Hedlund Says:

    Vivid, poignant poem of loss. A scene of both stasis and change. The survivor or caretaker is not ready to move on, but nature inevitably does. Beautifully penned.

  2. T. Johnson Says:

    A simply wonderful poem. I am always equally touched by the life stories/careers/backgrounds of contributors, which are interesting works of art unto themselves.

  3. Brandon Bordelon Says:

    broken teacup
    thorns are restored
    to the roses

  4. Mary F.Ahearn Says:

    Haunting, very beautiful haiku. Feeling that cold rain and loss.

  5. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    Wow.

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    A well-depicted sense of sadness, loss and even a touch of madness here (the teacup made me think of the Mad Hatter's tea party) I really like this gothic haiku.

    marion

  7. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Love this so much. Such romantic images and feelings.

  8. Alan Summers Says:

    Excellent! Just the right amount of poignancy.

    Alan

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